today i'm going to write a poem about Beijing, China . and this is my poem
I'm dying in the polluted air
someone please come and save me one day.
this whether is killing me every day
some one please Chang the whether any day.
the end
Hi Garv,
ReplyDeleteLeslie here, a member of the Summer Learning Journey team and I'm reading your poem about how you might feel if you were in Beijing. You've created a very dramatic poem!!
Unfortunately it's true that there those who really suffer when it's a very smoggy day in Beijing because it makes it hard for them to breathe. Beijing isn't the only polluted city in the world, for sure. London, England has been dreadfully polluted in the past and Toronto, Canada, where I grew up, sometimes has really smoggy days. That's usually because of the number of cars on the road burning fossil fuels.
We need to find new and better ways to have energy for our homes and cars and businesses, don't we. As you say, let's hope that someone will come up with a new and wonderful idea as to how things can change for the better!!
Good work, writing a poem!! That's very creative.
I'll continue to enjoy reading your blog.
Cheers,
Leslie