Friday 6 March 2020

Atlantis

This week we had to write a story about a city that has been flooded ( not real story ). I enjoyed writing about it. It was in interesting seeing the photo of what we were going to writing about. I learned new words like top to there heels which means ran. I enjoyed writing this and I hope you enjoy reading this.

hope you enjoy.   


Atlantis









2 years ago a beautiful city called New York City was a busy city at that time. People were Driving normally. People were walking around on the paths. You can hear the dogs barking you can hear the car honking. It was noisy . There were tall buildings and hotels. Some kids were walking to school with their friends.  A lot of adults are going to work rushing, running. It was busy. For that city it was completely normal to be that busy and rushing around. One day 2 kids were walking to school and saw something rising………..

It was a big wave of water. The kids said, “ wow “. The kids' names were Luke and Jake. Luke was shocked and Jake was just taking photos. After some time everybody realised that a wave was coming for them. Everybody was scared and did not know what to do. Everybody took to their heels  . Luke told Jake to stop taking photos but Jake did not listen until……….

The wave struck one of the buildings and the building went down. The water splashed onto the people and made them wet. Jake stopped taking photos and ran Luke ran too because the wave was close to them. The water was rising and rising and rising. You could see the sea animals. You could see a diver trying to survive but he could not. People kept running and some people went inside buildings and houses until……..’;

BANG .
People thought that another wave smacked into a building but it did not. This time it broke a park and a house and even a birthday party at that house. Luke and Jake went crazy and did not know what to do until someone came in a car and told them to get in. Luke and Jake  jumped into the car. The driver pressed his foot on the gas the car drove at 200miles p/h. The driver was the diver who was in the water. Luke and Jake were shocked. Luke said to Jake that,``What the heck. How did you get out?”. The diver did not say anything. The wave was across the whole city the cars were flooded with water. The people who were outside had to go inside the buildings but all the buildings people were saying on the intercom said PLEASE GO TO THE TOPMOST FLOOR I REPEAT GO TO THE TOPMOST FLOOR. Every building was saying that on the intercom. Luke was still in shock that he passed out and jake took photos of him and posted in on Instagram and he wrote, “ My friend passed out #Please help. lol.” the diver dropped them on the cites most tallest
building which had a alarm going crazy but it was the safest place to go the diver jumped in at the right time into the building and closed the door then ran to the topmost floor and did not come back down. Until…….

 There were 2 BANGS at once that was to hotels went down and they were called holiday inn hotels. Some people were suffocating from the water inside the building. But Luke and Jake survived, including  the diver. The diver introduced himself and said, “ Hi my name is Carol and I was just scuba diving until the wave came and got me. I got scared and tried to run but I could not. After a couple of seconds the wave got me. But I did not lose hope I tried to get out and I did and that is how I survived !.” Luke woke up and saw the diver and fainted and passed out again Jake took a photo and posted it on Instagram but this time he wrote, “ good news and bad news Luke wake up Luke fainted # help again”. Jake was happy until…….

A turtle BANGED into the window. Jake said,” save the turtles save the turtles “. Luke wakes up and says…….





TBC
To be continued 

 

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