MY amazing holiday

today we wrote about our holiday. I enjoyed writing about  my holiday. here is an example about my holiday writing . hope you enjoy it. 

My amazing holiday

Holiday is like a school break even you have a free time on a holiday

Wednesday

On the beautiful wednesday we went to Queenstown on a fLight named Jet star. I was bored on that flight cause the flight DIDN'T HAD A TV that's why I was bored on that flight for two hours even I had to wait for  one hour because my dad didn't arrive at the airport so I have to wait for my dad for one hour. When he arrived we went to the hotel he booked for us . When we got our room we setted everything in the room after that we went to city to buy some Grocery for our beautiful room then we went to bed.

Thursday 

0n my Favorite day we went to skyline in the tallest  mountain in queenstown I WAS SCARED.when I was scared My dad said  “there is nothing to be scared of” when he was saying all of those things we were already at the top and I said YAY. when we were in the top we did a activate named luge it was like go karting. The track was in the DARK FOREST. It was so cool. When I Was riding The fast luge I felt cold like I was in a snowball without cloths and got frozen in the blizzard. But I still came first.when are pass ended we went back to the hotel to have some yummy pizza for dinner. After that we went to the sweet sleep.

Friday

  On Friday morning I was sleeping like a Horse in my bed room. When I was sleeping my dad came jumping like a monkey to my room to wake me up from my sweet sleep. He said “Garv wake it is snowing Outside” . I jumped from my bed and said to my dad WHAT HAPPENED. Then my dad said that it is snowing outside. When I looked out from my window and I saw snowing I went out and sanded there for two hours. It was time  for my flight. We were in a rush because the people were boerding in the flight and the flight was almost about to departure. And we were the 3rth person on the FLight and I went like Yay then the pilot said shuush. At 3pm we landed my brother said that he needs some air the fan of the plan was still on when we came out we almost flew away. Our uncle came to pick me up from the airport. Then we went to paradise to buy some food cause were hungry. After that we went to Kmart to get my uncles phone. Then we went to our home and got some sleep.

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